{"id":5898,"date":"2012-06-01T16:41:14","date_gmt":"2012-06-01T07:41:14","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.btbpress.com\/?p=5898"},"modified":"2012-06-01T16:41:14","modified_gmt":"2012-06-01T07:41:14","slug":"home-alone-feedback","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.btbpress.com\/ja\/home-alone-feedback\/","title":{"rendered":"Home Alone (Feedback)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Thanks for all your comments. I think we ended up talking more about using children&#8217;s reins than anything else, but that&#8217;s a really interesting topic as well. By the way, I noticed today that I forgot to update my ALC blog with the new entry. Please remind me next week!<\/p>\n<p>Here is some feedback on your comments. Feel free to ask me questions if I miss something you were not sure about. <!--more--><\/p>\n<p>You probably mean the incident, a 3-year-old boy has died after falling from the 5th-floor balcony of his home in Aichi.<br \/>\n<strong>You can actually use &#8220;where&#8221; in this sentence: the incident where a 3-year-old boy&#8230;<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>and you would end up living with the guilt and pain for the rest of your life.<br \/>\n<strong>Nice.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>As YU said, I can\u2019t believe that how she could do that.<br \/>\n<strong>&#8220;I can&#8217;t believe she could do that&#8221; or &#8220;I can&#8217;t understand how she could do that.&#8221;<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Often mother has to child rearing alone because her husband is too busy at work<br \/>\n<strong>Mothers often have to bring up children alone because their husbands are too busy at work.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I think toddlers should not be left alone just for even a little time.<br \/>\n<strong>I don&#8217;t think that toddlers should be left along even for just a little time. (A-Z: Negative sentence word order)<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I hadn\u2019t known about the news of this accident until my husband told me that.<br \/>\n<strong>&#8220;I hadn&#8217;t heard&#8230;&#8221; or &#8220;I didn&#8217;t know&#8230;.&#8221; You don&#8217;t need &#8220;that&#8221; on the end of the sentence, either; &#8220;told me about it&#8221; would sound more natural.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>There were heavy thunder and lighting 3 times today in my area.<br \/>\n<strong>There was heavy thunder and lightning three times today in my area.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>You know what children do is always beyond our expectation.<br \/>\n<strong>You know that children always do the unexpected.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Now I am a student and I can\u2019t even imagine having my children!<br \/>\n<strong>Now I am a student, and I can&#8217;t even imagine having children.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Wow! Now we can see \u201cposting time\u201d !<br \/>\n<strong>I had to ask the guy who made the website to add that feature. Thanks for noticing.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Yesterday I found a short letter(notice) from TEPCO in my mailbox. It was written that why they need to raise electricity bill this summer.<br \/>\n<strong>It explained why they need to raise&#8230;<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Actually I even hesitate in taking shower when no one can sit in with my sleeping daughter.<br \/>\n<strong>Actually, I even hesitate to take a shower when there is no one to sit with my sleeping daughter.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>By the way, did you hear about the horrible news that a naked man ate another naked man\u2019s face on a highway in Miami?<br \/>\n<strong>Yes, I did. It was all over the British news as well. There are some very strange people in this world!<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>My sons have not married yet,<br \/>\n<strong>My sons are not married yet,<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Your story made me feel scary!<br \/>\n<strong>Your story made me feel scared. \/ Your story scared me.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>My daughter is still 8, so I don\u2019t think she is big enough, but I had to leave her alone when I went to a meeting at my son\u2019s junior high school in April.<br \/>\n<strong>Excuse my ignorance, but why couldn&#8217;t you just say to the school, &#8220;Sorry, I can&#8217;t come to the meeting because there is no  one to look after my daughter?&#8221;<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I got a notice from my daughters school yesterday, and it says a pervert has been seen in my area. A junior high school girl was flashed on her way home.<br \/>\n<strong>Unfortunately, this seems to be extremely common in Japan.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Personally, I don\u2019t agree to leaving children alone in a house or apartment any age of children.<br \/>\n<strong>Personally, I don&#8217;t agree with leaving children of any age alone in a house or an apartment.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>I came to my senses with his word.<br \/>\n<strong>His words brought me to my senses.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>You\u2019ve got me wrong!! Just because I said I didn\u2019t know what to say, it doesn\u2019t mean that I am not interested in the topic:)<br \/>\n<strong>Very nice sentences.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>&#8230;and all parents have to do the job at least once for their child.<br \/>\n<strong>What does &#8220;have to&#8221; mean? Is it the law!? What happens if you just say, &#8220;I&#8217;m sorry, I can&#8217;t do it because I&#8217;m too busy&#8221;?<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>so I had to left my children home.<br \/>\n<strong>&#8230; so I have do leave my children at home.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>That is the goriest story I\u2019ve ever heard.<br \/>\n<strong>&#8220;Gory&#8221; is exactly the right word for this story! Well done!<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Sometimes it worked, but other times it made things worse.<br \/>\n<strong>Nice sentence.<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>You can imagine how hard it is to reject your child\u2019s plea as he\/she is crying, reaching out for you with their small hands, and saying \u201c\u30de\u30de\uff5e\u3001\u30de\u30de\uff5e.\u201d<br \/>\n<strong>I don&#8217;t think my mother would have had any problem with that! She would just have told me to shut up!!<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s it for this week. I&#8217;ll be back again with a new topic on Monday. Bye for now.<br \/>\n<\/p>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Thanks for all your comments. 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