I’m going to be really busy tomorrow and Saturday, so I thought it would be better to do the feedback entry a bit early in case I don’t get a chance to do it at all.
This time, there are only a few comments, so it’s going to be pretty easy!
If some other people were thinking of posting comments on the topic, please feel free to post them on this entry instead. I will definitely read them, but I’m afraid I won’t be able to give you any feedback on your English.
Here is my feedback on the comments that were posted on the original entry.
It’s not clear if her night job is a problem for him, but if so, he should ask her to look for a daytime job.
If I were him, No.2 would be the most questionable.
If I were him, No. 2 would be my biggest concern / the most serious issue.
so that she could spend all what she earned for herself.
so that she could spend everything she earned on herself.
I might sound a bit harsh, but…
This might sound a bit harsh, but…
To me, it just sounds as if she could be married with anyone as long as he payed all the rent and households.
To me, it just sounds as if she doesn’t care who she is married to as long as he pays the rent and all the household bills.
I would advice him to go ahead and divorce her.
I would advise him to go ahead and divorce her. (“Advice” is a noun; “advise” is a verb. Lots of native speakers get this wrong too!)
Why would anyone take all the time and energy to write back a sincere advice to a stranger?
I guess some people just like to give advice to others!
That’s it for now. Sorry about the very short week, but as I said, feel free to post any more comments on this entry.
Have a great weekend.